- Apr 12, 2023
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I like that they're focusing more on the story, but the romance bits – or moments supposed to advance the MC's relationship with the LIs – feel weird or poorly implemented, imho. For instance, they start kissing each other for no apparent reason, or the mom's sudden change of heart (she suddenly finds out she lust for her son) feels off. I get it's not a Shakespearean novel, but still...