Wow, what do you think made me convince to play this game...? Are you always this insulting to possible supporters?
No. I love my supporters and fans. But my supporters and fans understand and love my story for what it is, with its flawed characters and all. The main thing is that they don't go into it thinking it's gonna be a harem power fantasy where the male fucks everything that moves after 0.1 picoseconds. I'm just tired of people bitching about Erik even after I warn it might spark some reactions in the dev notes and intro, and yet people play it. Sorry If it sounded like I attacked you in particular.
His acceptance would have felt a lot less 'spineless' if he had begun to change his mind somewhat around the midpoint of the current content instead of almost at the end of this update. Especially since he would be feeling a lot more comfortable due to their bond and his own memories of their childhood.
But he did? At the end of chapter 1. That's not really the midpoint but much earlier. And then it was around 2.3 or so that he finally realised what he wanted, and that it wasn't just the alcohol that had pushed him that night.
It's not so much his refusal but the way he backs down every time his sister wants to take things further. If he was truly that adamant against it, it would have felt way more natural if he had put his foot down a bit stronger, not this scaredy-cat attitude shown throughout most of the current content.
Like I explained above, it's not his hesitance to respond in kind, it's the way he does it. Even after they already crossed the line.
Can you explain what's stronger than... you know, kissing your sister in the mouth and then engaging in a forbidden relationship behind their mom's back, even knowing how bad it is. Given how responsible he's always been, and how he always protected his "little" sister", it's such a big change of attitude for him since that very night in chapter 1. And then even more when he finally accepts it not much after.
Look, I love feedback but I really don't think you should be writing the story in my place. I take like a week or more after each update to plan the next for a reason, just writing, brainstorming ideas, trying to keep it coherent (as far as an adult game gets). If you have some fresh ideas go ahead and tell me though, and I'll consider them.
This doesn't mean I don't like the story, I actually loved it, it's a fresh approach to the subject. It's just this one thing that just didn't feel 'authentic'. (leaving aside the relationship development between the twins and their mother)
I'm glad you ended up liking it and found it unique. Could you please elaborate about that last thing? Again, I'm always open to feedback and refining the story (if it's not a super huge change that will make me rework it fully).
