- Oct 1, 2023
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For what it is worth, the spelling and grammar errors were actually pretty minor. As someone who manages to use context to understand any mistakes I think the complaints about that kind of thing are a bit overblown. Especially since the dev was upfront that this is not a proofread version. For those that cannot stand minor spelling mistakes, have you considered waiting. I would much rather get the content a little earlier and deal with that.Hi. I've been doing the proofreading and editor role for this game since just after ch1 was released.
Ch7 pt 2 has been the most troubled release so far, and it is my understanding that this was largely due to unavoidable real-life issues encountered by the Dev. In amongst the chaos, unfortunately there was not an opportunity for me to do a proofread pass of any of the added/changed contents.
I would suggest that dissatisfaction with the quality of this release is more related to the extremely high expectations that the preceding 6 chapters has established - in 95+% of other games, this level of product would be considered exceptional. It in is the nature of being one of the best that any deviation from the previous heights is painfully obvious in comparison. A return to the mean is in some ways inevitable.
For my part, I encourage and support the Dev to keep at it and bring this amazing complex story to a satisfying conclusion.
Regarding plans to improve the text issues in the Ch7pt2 release: I have now received both the release version archive and the source code files, so I have been able to start the review process. Once I complete my part (which takes 1-4 weeks depending on the size of the chapter) typically there will be a patch version released with the edited scripts.
The Dev is definitely not a native speaker and is certainly aware of the difficulty in writing grammatically correct vernacular English, and this is why he has invited me to be involved in the process. I remain extremely impressed by the effort and quality of the creative content that he has given us all, and especially by the sheer volume of effort that has gone into this project. As I like to repeatedly point out, the total word count of this game is now around 2/3rds of the total words count of the Lord of the Rings novel trilogy.
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Unrelated to the above:
The unreasonable repeated negativity from a recent frequent poster in this thread has earned that person a place on my ignore list. How pleasant for me to no longer have to endure another entitled, whiny, serial complainer clogging my feeds.
I recommend that everyone should make use of the Ignore functionality of this forum, it improves the experience greatly.
I think most of the frustration for this release is based on the small amount of content and the growing unease that the planned game is coming to a close. I can understand those concerns. It is a bit grating that those concerns are always phrased so negatively. This is consistently one of the best games on the site IMO, and the strong feelings towards it from the community should be a good indicator that people CARE about this game. I hope the dev understands that is an impressive feat on it's own. And I hope the people in this forum can learn to process their uneasy feelings in a mature way and express themselves in a way that isn't "The dev needs to do a better job of exactly what I want, or I will stop pirating his game for free" as opposed to "This is a really good game which has caused me to become invested in it, I am really enjoying most of it but I have a concern about X". I won't hold my breath. The dev has a plan, and so far he has not let us down on the overall story - until he does I won't sweat the end too much. Sure I occasionally get burned by errant dragonfire with this attitude, but it beats worrying for years.
As far as the concerns about no true Dom path, I can't really speak to that - since it is not my particular kink. I would just say that it is inevitable that the MC will have a personality - there is no way a dev could leave that 100% to the player as it would mean infinite branches. This MC is a pretty reasonable person with a focus on kindness and empathy. If your version of a Dom does not have those traits, then maybe it isn't for you. If I am being honest, I would prefer a sub who was a little less willing at times - but the variety of kinks and the inclusion of a reasonably realistically written MC is more important than having these little things exactly how I would want them if the dev was building this for me - as so many people seem to think he is.