Updated for the Ep3 Fix (2024-12-22).
A lot of "Engrish", even in some high quality VNs comes from the "flow" of conversation. Like it may technically be correct grammar and spelling but the actual conversations come off as awkward. I suspect the person who made the comment is American
The grammar and spelling has come up before to be honest. Spellings and Typos some slip through every now and then. They soon get fixed.
I'm a professional proofreader and I'm English, and I can't think that I've noticed anything much to comment on here – I haven't played Ep3 and it was a little while ago that I played Ep2, but nothing came up from the first two eps that would make me take note (you'll always get some typos/minor errors, but that's not a problem in itself).
Ah yes, I remember that! And yeah, the other thing to note is that most of the text in these games is dialogue, and that doesn't follow the same rules. Well-written dialogue would be written "as we speak it", because if it was held to the same rules of grammar, it would sound unnatural a lot of the time. That's where your US favourite of "could care less" comes in - it's wrong, but people do (incorrectly) say it, so using it in dialogue is not always wrong. Typos should still be eliminated as much as possible though, unless used to suggest accent or similar (like using "nuffink" instead of "nothing" as an extreme example).
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It's the same as literally. That one winds me up more than "could care less" oh she literally laughed her head off. Well she didn't she. She's over there head still attached.
idk for sure i know hardly anything ab the creator but there's a few spots that were sentence errors at least and you had to use context clues lmao . Its such a nitpick tho. Nothing nearly as bad as lust academy. Overall really great ep if you enjoyed 1 and 2
She might be the one I'm most looking forward to seeing more of.
Oh it's the other teacher I'm most excited for. Forget her name,but I'm can see her being into a little bdsm.
Veronika (Dr. Novotna) doesn't do it for me. I'll give her a try for completion's sake though, and see if she wins me around.
Yeah I get that, I feel the same about the succubus girl (god I need to play this again to get the names back) obviously I still view the scenes for reasons
They don't quite look the same, but you have this (or I refer to my cards, or Milton's thread if I've not got cards ready for other games):
Succubus girl???
Oh wow, they do look different. Thanks for this.
Yeah I meant selina.
yeah it was probably just my 'muricanism having to do some double takes and me making a bad joke earlier. Ep 3 was great tho after fully finishing it. As an advocate of full sending on the first run this one made me laugh (and kind of feel like an asshole
) at the consequences and impending doom like another certain college game. Y'all will like it...preemptive sorry...ill see myself out for awhileYou should totally share Ep3 so the rest of us can playyeah it was probably just my 'muricanism having to do some double takes and me making a bad joke earlier. Ep 3 was great tho after fully finishing it. As an advocate of full sending on the first run this one made me laugh (and kind of feel like an asshole
We definitely need a hero like,You should totally share Ep3 so the rest of us can play
