VN Working on my first game, looking for feedback

[vampz]

Well, others have replied, but yeah basically netorase isn't cheating per se, it's more akin to sharing (MC willingly shares his LI with others, while netorare is cheating, the LI decides to cheat on MC).

I like the threesome idea, the step-sister can be cool, the futa friend too (would it be for the GF only or would the MC be able to play with her too ?)

Are you asking about the futa or step sister?
Either way, the idea I currently have is for my version of Tara to be futa (which would explain why she's shy), and the step sister would be younger and inexperienced
From that point, I actually want to create a side story for them to be together, at least sexually (though I think building an actual relationship would be far more interesting)

As for playing around, step sister + MC and Futa + MC are planned, also threesome of them
Not sure about GF with them, but I'm open to ideas

 

[niennunb]

Are you asking about the futa or step sister?

Either way, the idea I currently have is for my version of Tara to be futa (which would explain why she's shy), and the step sister would be younger and inexperienced
From that point, I actually want to create a side story for them to be together, at least sexually (though I think building an actual relationship would be far more interesting)

Color me intrigued !

As for playing around, step sister + MC and Futa + MC are planned, also threesome of them
Not sure about GF with them, but I'm open to ideas

 

[vampz]

Updated the main post with the 2 new characters

Also, here is a preview of their love affair
You have no idea how difficult it was to make it work, so I really hope you like it

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[vampz]

Hi all
I've been working hard on generating some more art for the game, and wanted to share some with you
Also, I thought on the names of the different girls (not 100% set, but I like them)
Let me know your thoughts (names, art, direction etc), every bit of feedback counts

I do have some specific questions to you
How much do you care about backgrounds? I can get decent results by generating an image via txt2img, then get variations via img2img, and it's decently consistent, but how much do you care about this?
Also, for some reason I have a severe issue with earrings, I can't get rid of them, and they keep changing styles between images. how much would that bother you? because I would rather give you more images per event, even if they're not that consistent

Can't wait to hear your thoughts
BTW, the images below are images I thought are good, but I have better shots, or I need to remake them
So consider them usable bloopers, I guess

Spoiler: GF - Rose

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Spoiler: Slutty BFF - Ashley

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Spoiler: Shy Futa BFF - Jessica

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Spoiler: Goth Step-Sis - Helen

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[F68423]

Well i need to say the pictures look quite good so fare as of the background i dont think it is that important. I mean it should match with the scene (when you are in your bedroom then there shouldnt be a beach in the background) but exapt that i dont think it is that important.
I think you chose good names for the character. I personally think each name matches there face.i like the art so i look forward what you will creat. Just a short question. Will the shy futa also fuck girlfriend ?
Would be quite hot and is my main interrest.

 

[vampz]

Well i need to say the pictures look quite good so fare as of the background i dont think it is that important. I mean it should match with the scene (when you are in your bedroom then there shouldnt be a beach in the background) but exapt that i dont think it is that important.
I think you chose good names for the character. I personally think each name matches there face.i like the art so i look forward what you will creat. Just a short question. Will the shy futa also fuck girlfriend ?
Would be quite hot and is my main interrest.

Thanks man
I've been mostly working on refining the art quite a bit lately, I'll probably post some updated images for comparison

As for GF and Futa, could very well be
The main issue is with creating images of two specific characters on screen at the same time, which for AI isn't that easy, but I'm working my way through it
But that is definitely an option

I think I'll need to write a general overview of what I'm planning, and post it here to get some feedback and suggestions

 

[F68423]

I know. I couldnt generat a good picture with 1 futa and 1 female at all so i wish you better luck than me.
And you are right a general description of the story and a few of your ideas would be good

 

[tanstaafl]

I know. I couldnt generat a good picture with 1 futa and 1 female at all so i wish you better luck than me.
And you are right a general description of the story and a few of your ideas would be good

Generating two characters without specialized loras or models is hard without inpainting. Worth researching the correct models and/or how to inpaint.

 

[gordonpfington]

Make Futa an option, not locked in automatically. That will widen your potential audience.

 

[vampz]

Make Futa an option, not locked in automatically. That will widen your potential audience.

You mean make it an option if the character is a futa or not? because that means generating separate art for every scenario, and would be a ton of work

Instead I'll give the options to skip those parts of the story, for people who aren't interested
I think that's the best option, if I want to actually give you all enough art to actually enjoy

But I'll take that under consideration, and see what happens

 

[vampz]

Generating two characters without specialized loras or models is hard without inpainting. Worth researching the correct models and/or how to inpaint.

Actually, the only special thing you need for two distinct characters in a regional prompting tool
I'm using Forge Couple, because I'm working on Forge webui
And I was actually able to get some good results with characters touching each other, but I haven't really done much of the actual sex yet, so I'll see how much of a bother that gets

 

[tanstaafl]

Actually, the only special thing you need for two distinct characters in a regional prompting tool
I'm using Forge Couple, because I'm working on Forge webui
And I was actually able to get some good results with characters touching each other, but I haven't really done much of the actual sex yet, so I'll see how much of a bother that gets

I'm in comfy so I'll have to do a bit of research into it. Also, I just started really learning about two weeks ago, lol.

 

[vampz]

I'm in comfy so I'll have to do a bit of research into it. Also, I just started really learning about two weeks ago, lol.

I started a month ago, so I'm equally a noob

Let me show you an example of how well a regional prompter could work, if you're willing to give it enough attempts (because I'm clearly not good enough with proper prompting yet)
Also a first look at the art style I'm working with now
The beauty of what using Adetailer could do

 

[tanstaafl]

I started a month ago, so I'm equally a noob

Let me show you an example of how well a regional prompter could work, if you're willing to give it enough attempts (because I'm clearly not good enough with proper prompting yet)
Also a first look at the art style I'm working with now
The beauty of what using Adetailer could do

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I'm loving detailer, lol, though I might be going a bit crazy with them. Here's my standard, no frills, comfy workflow right now. The three big boxes in the middle are face detaler, hand detailer and eye detailer (all ADetailer with diferent models loaded).



Edit: Bottom left grouping box is just a refiner.

 

[vampz]

I'm loving detailer, lol, though I might be going a bit crazy with them. Here's my standard, no frills, comfy workflow right now. The three big boxes in the middle are face detaler, hand detailer and eye detailer (all ADetailer with diferent models loaded).

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Edit: Bottom left grouping box is just a refiner.

Wow, you're actually working on a workflow
I'm just messing around with prompts and Loras, I haven't even looked into workflows
Maybe in the future

 

[tanstaafl]

Wow, you're actually working on a workflow
I'm just messing around with prompts and Loras, I haven't even looked into workflows
Maybe in the future

First attempt at regional. Didn't even change the demo prompts, lol.

 

[vampz]

First attempt at regional. Didn't even change the demo prompts, lol.
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I've never worked with Comfy, so I can't really help
But maybe take a look at

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I found some very helpful guides on Civit, always good to search there

 

[tanstaafl]

I've never worked with Comfy, so I can't really help
But maybe take a look at

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I found some very helpful guides on Civit, always good to search there

I mean, it's turning out to be not that difficult. Pretty straight forward, but some prompt help to work our the interactions would be nice, I'll definitely be reading that article and a few more probably.


Edit: Ignore the wonkiness, no detailers set up.

 

[tanstaafl]

I mean, it's turning out to be not that difficult. Pretty straight forward, but some prompt help to work our the interactions would be nice, I'll definitely be reading that article and a few more probably.
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Edit: Ignore the wonkiness, no detailers set up.

Closing in on it now. Cool stuff, thanks for the tip.

 

[vampz]

Closing in on it now. Cool stuff, thanks for the tip.
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Sure thing, glad to help