Its an okay introduction, but the story and pictures seem to leave a bit to much out.
Its jumping in the story/sex scenes a bit to much.
More dialog and more pictures following eachother instead of jumping minutes or hours between the pictures, with just small comments to the pictures.
Whats there is good, its just not enough pictures/dialog in the scenes to be enjoyable.
Put some more work in to it with that, and it can be great!
Its jumping in the story/sex scenes a bit to much.
More dialog and more pictures following eachother instead of jumping minutes or hours between the pictures, with just small comments to the pictures.
Whats there is good, its just not enough pictures/dialog in the scenes to be enjoyable.
Put some more work in to it with that, and it can be great!