This AVN was good in like 2020, but it's been going for nearly 7 years and should've been finished years ago.
Most people will click on the game for the visuals, because the visuals are still pretty good. You might get hooked in by the writing being pretty good in the beginning, maybe you're interested in some of the story beats. But ultimately, you will slog through hours and hours of the most meaningless, repetitive, meandering dialogue you will ever see. Because of this, the writing doesn't even feel like it justifies the VERY SPARCE sexual scenes, especially since many of them are already several years old and the once great visuals are now dated.
The big thing that a lot of dev's don't seem to comprehend is that more writing does not equate to GOOD writing. In fact, many bad writers fill their stories with pages and pages of worthless text. What's funny as well is that despite all the text, all of the characters are boring. None of htem are fun or interesting, they're all bland. Another thing is that AVN devs seem to compare themselves to novels, which is both silly and egotistical. AVNs are closer to comics, or even movies. If you have a visual element to show us something, DO NOT TELL IT TO US. Dumping exposition and monologues is not only unnecessary, but actively detract from the project.
I hope at this point that the dev just dumps this project and starts a new one, perhaps a new AVN with allow them to introduce some fresh writing and ideas, and use the skills they've learnt more effectively.
All in all, 2/10 experience, so 1/5 on here.
Most people will click on the game for the visuals, because the visuals are still pretty good. You might get hooked in by the writing being pretty good in the beginning, maybe you're interested in some of the story beats. But ultimately, you will slog through hours and hours of the most meaningless, repetitive, meandering dialogue you will ever see. Because of this, the writing doesn't even feel like it justifies the VERY SPARCE sexual scenes, especially since many of them are already several years old and the once great visuals are now dated.
The big thing that a lot of dev's don't seem to comprehend is that more writing does not equate to GOOD writing. In fact, many bad writers fill their stories with pages and pages of worthless text. What's funny as well is that despite all the text, all of the characters are boring. None of htem are fun or interesting, they're all bland. Another thing is that AVN devs seem to compare themselves to novels, which is both silly and egotistical. AVNs are closer to comics, or even movies. If you have a visual element to show us something, DO NOT TELL IT TO US. Dumping exposition and monologues is not only unnecessary, but actively detract from the project.
I hope at this point that the dev just dumps this project and starts a new one, perhaps a new AVN with allow them to introduce some fresh writing and ideas, and use the skills they've learnt more effectively.
All in all, 2/10 experience, so 1/5 on here.