VN Ren'Py Race of Life [Act 1 v1.02] [Underground Studio]

[bamachine]

How did you even manage to go this far? According to the rest of your review, you should've bailed out right after Lily was confirmed to be comatose for an undefined amount of time.

The first srtaw was Allison coming back to the park to get Lily, telling about the house being broken into. Lily's "accident" nearly made me quit right then but I saw it as a possible way for the mc and Allison to possibly reconnect but it really had my hackles raised. As soon as I saw the "Wyatt" scene the following morning, that was the last straw.

I don't like to give up too early but those three things in rapid succession was enough for me to bail.

Not trying to discourage anyone else, as I said, it seems like a great game, for those that like well written drama with a good side of comedy. That just isn't what I am looking for, I just wish more of the devs that make my type of game(everything above minus the drama), were as good at writing. I have found a few but too far in between, imo.

 

[Maviarab]

Just a little mini-review. While I love the art, the writing, especially the humor and the characters, I just got to the mc thinking they saw Wyatt, who I assume is behind the break in at Allison's and maybe even Lily's accident. I know these are real life issues but that is not what I am looking for in these games. I go to them to escape the drama of real life, which is why I gravitate towards happy go lucky harem or single romance games, with only comedic drama.

So even though I have to give kudos to the dev(s) for the style, characters and writing, this will be a nope for me. I also loved Acting Lessons until it tore me heart out. I am not taking that kind of chance again. Gimme the escapism of simple single romance or drama free harem games.

I will say one more thing before I exit, Amen to this...

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Agree. I've said it a few times but the plot is really all over the place and becoming another 'intertwinnied' mess. Daughter needs urgent care, mega expensive...need money now...I know...I'll go illegal underground road racing where I could end up dead in a ditch. Just work on the fucking battery project....but then the MC is dumb as fucking bricks, academia aside...

Virtually every VN these days has to have some dumb ass crime/mafia/mob element...it's a damn joke. The story would not suffer at all without it. But hey, the dev wanted to make Fast & Furious 74 with more romance elements. It is what it is....so...there you go. You either accept the absurdity of the plot or you don't.

I will say one more thing before I exit...

Spoiler: Best Girl

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[Dr.TSoni]

Agree. I've said it a few times but the plot is really all over the place and becoming another 'intertwinnied' mess. Daughter needs urgent care, mega expensive...need money now...I know...I'll go illegal underground road racing where I could end up dead in a ditch. Just work on the fucking battery project....but then the MC is dumb as fucking bricks, academia aside...

Virtually every VN these days has to have some dumb ass crime/mafia/mob element...it's a damn joke. The story would not suffer at all without it. But hey, the dev wanted to make Fast & Furious 74 with more romance elements. It is what it is....so...there you go. You either accept the absurdity of the plot or you don't.

I will say one more thing before I exit...

Spoiler: Best Girl

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Sorry Mav but you posted the wrong photos

 

[Maviarab]

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With all due respect....half of this site would drool over and fuck a garbage can if it had a red wig draped over it

 

[Dr.TSoni]

With all due respect....half of this site would drool over and fuck a garbage can if it had a red wig draped over it

The red wig makes everything better
XD

 

[Idontplay]

With all due respect....half of this site would drool over and fuck a garbage can if it had a red wig draped over it

Is it a garbage can with a red wig and a pair of red eyed painted on it?


EDIT: green eyes, not red; dumbass!

 

[Dr.TSoni]

Is it a garbage can with a red wig and a pair of red eyed painted on it?

Eyes are acceptable between blue and green, and let's not forget the freckles.

 

[Idontplay]

Then a garbage can with a red wig, an eye green, the other one blue and some freckles painted on it. We have a deal.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

We have a gentleman's agreement