VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Mistress Marigold's Home Improvement [v1.0] [Doc62 Productions]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    uuhwhat

    Neat short game. Kinetic novel, so no choices to be made.

    I was positively surprised to see this had a bit of breast expansion, although it doesn't matter all that much since before that happening you don't really see her breasts on full display anyways, so the "impact" isn't all that notable. Also a thing worth pointing out is that it has a surprising amount of nipple focus, which is really rare, especially in western porn games. Makes me wonder why no lactation stuff, it kinda is the next logical step.

    On the other hand, while the girl looks good in my opinion, i don't know whats happening with the MC. He has the haircut of 13 year old Justin Bieber while at the same time looking like a wax statue of a 55 year old with leather skin. Really off-putting IMO.
    Also as said in the beginning, its quite short and doesn't offer a lot in terms of "fap-worthy" scenes. about 70 percent of the VN is spent teasing, with some light groping/nipple play kinda stuff. Only in the very end do things actually happen. And then it ends. The ending is very abrupt without an actual conclusion, they're both naked in the bathtub and you think something will go down but then, finito.

    All in all, a bit dissappointing towards the end, MC looks weird, however i'll much commend that this game wasn't as vanilla as I expected.
    I don't say this often in regards to WEGs; i wish it were longer. And had a bit more meat on its bones overall.
  2. 2.00 star(s)

    cyphre

    I'm not sure why im even bothering but someone has to i guess.

    As description says, a 30 minute kinetic novel about a dude who comes to woman's home to help with some woodwork and other issues. If you want to rub one out, honestly this is a popular genre in adult videos and most of them are better so just do that. Obviously story barely exist.

    I probably would leave it at 3 as something deeply mediocre but 3 things really bring this down. First of all is whatever is going on on MC head. The dead squirrel he wears on top of his noggin is super distracting. Second is that Mari looks TERRIFYING, you know the analogue horrors and creepypastas where people stretch the smiles to unreal proportion to make uncanny feeling stronger? Well i half expected it to become a horror due to how scary she looks.

    And third, for the developer, i highly recommend to tone down the *laughs* *giggles* *winks* and all that stuff, i swear over half of the sentenses in this contain this crap. There are better ways to convey this and it should be used in moderation.