VN - Ren'Py - Living with Vicky [v1.0 Remake] [StannyStanny]

needs better proof reading and work on the pacing. I mean the mc wants to jump Vicky within in the first 5 minutes and ask to see his sister in undies in the first 10 minutes, no build up or relationship building. unfortunately i had to stop playing because of this.

Don't think this is written very well, it has very few choices and ALL of them have 0 impact so far(why even have them).

Overall the "game" is just a run of the mill incest VN, because you can't call this a game as nothing has actual impact.

Everything in this VN has been done by devs that write better or animate/render better or devs that give actual choices with impact.

I don't see any redeeming qualities in this VN it does not separate or outshine any other games in this genre in any of the aspects.

So far one of my favorite visual novels ever so far. "Landlady" is so fricking hot and her reactions are somewhat realistic of a lonely housewife isolated with the "tenant", who is giving her all the attention her husband didn't.
The dude is a real horny bastard and very forward with her. Love the focus so far on just the two of them, no 10 other characters I don't give a shit about, and I'm very much looking forward to the "room mate" joining them in the future. The game is straight to the point, no endless pointless dialogue, just the necessary amount to drive the plot forward. Just how I like it.

Cons: Their relationship is moving a bit too fast and I feel the build up to them finally have sex will be over soon. Can pace it out a bit more.

This one actually looks very promising. I am the type of guy that likes unrealistically large boobs, games with actual animations and good audio. All of which are not in this game but I would still put this game solidly above majority of the games on this site. It goes to show how impactful it is if your game has good pacing. Keep up the amazing work so far.

[ Review for version - 0.4 Early Access ]

TL;DR:
MC and Vicky have moved in together after Vicky's divorce. Hormones and horniness take over.

The Good:
Vicky is cute, and I like how she tugs between wanting to get intimate and feeling guilty about it. The Incest is also a nice bonus!

The Average:
It's very much a kinetic VN with the only choice being whether you want to see a little bit extra nudity between bouts of story and sex.

The Bad:
The MC does look a bit goblin, but I don't hate his design. It will put people off though, since most people want these stories to be in first person.


Thorough Review: Once the story has gone further I can do deeper dive into my review, but now there is still much to uncover.

Wishlist:
> More sex
> Pregnancy
> More on Vicky flipping her switch and taking control from the MC
> If you do bring the sister character in be careful to not make it too much harem. I want the focus to be Vicky and the MC.
> Same story if you bring in other women side characters: keep the focus on Vicky and MC.
> It would be nice if the ex-husband got a cameo as well, if only so he can witness and realise he's missed out on Vicky's new sexual development.

loving the AVN the renders are unique as you haven't seen them anywhere else yet and the story is pretty good as well and so is the eroticism is not half bad either and the pace at which the Developer decided to go with the MC and Vicky i like it it as well . keep it up i am looking forward to more

super game renders regular updates nice story hop he continue like that i am patreon now see if it keeps good i stay patreon an hop ther will be a bit more public exhib etc but exelent untill now version 0.4

This game is one of the masterpiece in mom and son Incest I think this story can beat A wife and mother in seduction i will love if there is some NTR mom stuff blackmailing mom or sharing mom with friends or other people or leaking the vicky private picture something or Vicky is protecting her son by compromising with bully something like that and i will love see it's Android portal

OK this looks good...but it's terrible.
The plot is nonsense
The renders in the samples are cherry picked while the actual ones in the rest of the game are terrible , filled with poke-throughs and clothes going over characters
The character faces look wierd ...
it's just a waste of time
the 2*s are even not a bad score

Where to begin...

My first point of contention would be the VN label. So far, as of the end of Chapter 2, there are two choice screens presented and no matter what you choose the game is not significantly influenced by the player's input. The remainder of the 'choice' screens are not really choices as there is only one option available. Why bother? Things may change in the future, but for now this game, for all intents and purposes, is a KN. Label it as such and be done with it.

Secondly, numerous misspellings and grammatical mistakes. Not the worst example, but enough to be distracting.

Thirdly, full of the standard tropes with no knew ground broken.

Fourth, two frame loops are not animations. It's ok to not have animations, but these bounce-backs are distracting and I would recommend not using them.

Fifth, unless there is a monumental change of direction in future releases, there will be forced sex. Another reason to label it as a KN.

If you like this type of story and don't care about agency and/or choice, strap yourselves in and go along for the ride. Otherwise, I would recommend spending your time with something that has more depth.

It's quite refreshing to see a game focusing so far on one love interest, and I quite hope it stays that way. Because that's what can make this game truly stand out from my humble point of view.

Other like: a decent looking "landlady", hits my preference in that she is quite realistic in both her shape and face expressions, and does not have those huge overwhelming surreal boobs like many other DAZ-made MILFs tend to do.

Dislikes\areas for potential improvement:
1) MC a bit too douche and tends to think too much with his cock
2) "Landlady" having too little or uncertain agency.

- I wanna look up your skirt, lemme do it
- I can't do that, it's wrong
- But I have this urges and you are so hot
- Well okay, you make me feel young again

- I wanna make out with you, let's do it
- This is wring for us, we should not do that
- But I know you like it
*ignores her and makes out with her anyway*
*she somehow yields and accepts it*

So it's not about how quick the progression towards sex is, but rather it's about the actions and reactions that look, to my taste, a bit too primitive

Very good, the story progresses too fast to get bored, I wouldn't be surprised if there is sex in the next update
In addition, the MILF is not that slim either, but she has her curves and her very remarkable things.
Although there are only 2 characters, the relationship progresses very quickly for my taste

i was honestly not expecting much, but the writing is really great.
the sexual tension is build up rather quickly, which can be a good thing if the writing is proper, which it is.
I also like how there is no wall of text, while the story does not progress like in other games.
The text messages between the characters is nothing new, but is well executed, and esp. the last ones are very hot.

Wow, this was definitely a great start! I will for sure be watching for more updates! The sexual tension is just the right amount without going too fast or too slow. The texting at the end was super hot. Excellent work!