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I like thick Butters , i support the decision to make her chubby.
I want their to be a succubus butters batch of bad ends with them having you end up sucked dry!!!!!!!!!
The game is great and I'm enjoying the path we're taking. I don't know why people are criticizing/hating it, after all, the game isn't finished yet—it's still in development, and there's still a long way to go before its development is complete. Until then, we can suggest things that can still be improved or even added, like new art, more depth in the characters, etc. The fact that there is more dialogue and depth in the characters (along with the very good art) already surpasses the first game.
You're doing a great job, keep it up
"After playing within the universe of this series, it hit me: do all the characters (particularly the naked ones) have feet of steel? They have socks but no shoes? Lore wise like MLP, the earth ponies are vastly stronger on land while the unicorns and pegasi not so much. Anyway, it'll be funny if MC had strong feet for a human (like ryu and ken from street fighter). Overall, just a major overlooked aspect of the world cause everything else is more engaging anyway. This is just fantasyland nothing too real about it. However, rip feet on glass and other fatal sharp objects they walk across.
So far, I like the sequel! I really liked the secondary characters in the first game and I hope that you will gradually add them to this one.
Lightning Dust would be welcomed
Lightning Dust would be welcomed
- Mar 26, 2023
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I read two 3-stars reviews, that said "wall of texts" and it made me chuckle. I'm not saying to be mean to anyone, or to sound condescending, but those people probably don't have a lot of VNs under their belt. I use 0x52 URM when I play Ren'py VNs, and with it you can toggle a progress bar which shows how many line of script you read out of the maximum possible (including all paths). Currently, FwB2 has around 17k lines to be read, while for most VNs I read, they're usually around 45-60k. And then there's LiL which is around 250k or something. Also, most "line of text in the script" (which is for the player every "new" textbox) are usually really short, rarely over a line or two on the screen.
I think your writing is pretty concise, and to the point. It flows pretty naturally and to me, it's more on the lighter side of things as far as VNs go. For me, it's like, when I'm hesitating on what to catch up next and don't want something too dense, I know I can count on a FwB2 updates to give a light and refreshing read, with a warm cast of characters, and absolutely stunning art.
Keep up the good work, so far I've read both FwB, MG1000 and My Tuition Academia, and I had a great experience each time. One thing I absolutely love about FwB is the attention to the partner pleasure in lewd scene, which doesn't just feel like the macho version "yeah, I made her cum with my full piston technique because I'm a king in bed". And thank you very much for that ^^
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Yeah, I completely agree with you. One of my biggest criticisms towards a lot of visual novels, specifically Japanese developed, is how long and unconcise they can be. Which is why I make such an active effort to keep the pacing of my games sharp and the word count concise. Some people recall that I actually went a little too far with the conclusion to act 1. It went too far in the opposite direction many felt like it was rushed. On the flip side, I also have people saying there are too many words. Given the subjective nature of this, I suppose it's technically possible for both to be true, but it's a bit of a headache for me caught in the middle
This is actually a pattern I've noticed on F95zone for years now. Most negative reviews for visual novels on F95zone are along the lines of 'there are too many words!', which is both a shame and mildly amusing that they downloaded a book and their first thought was 'why is this full of words? ew!"
But I am a believer that good execution succeeds anything else. I can only hope my next projects are even better, and things like 'pacing' and 'word count' won't be on people's minds because they'll be too immersed in the story and content to notice.
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hello guys! i am following this game in and out over the course of the months...i was wondering when you think will be complete. I like to"forget" about games until they are finished so i can enjoy the fullest
I'm gonna 'finish' it in the next update, even if it takes a little longer than usual. The next update will be 1.0.0 which will include the end of the story and a 100% completion bonus, but it won't be the end of side-content.
- May 12, 2023
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Does the side-content include alternate endings\path\routes or it will be just side quests?
Yeah, there might be an alternative ending here or there. I'll be including two endings in 1.0.0 at least, the default ending and the pregnancy variant.
omg! so....finally i will see the sunrise.
thank you for this masterpiece and FWB 1!
- May 21, 2023
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meaning we got the "actual finish product" like complete edition? woohoo!
I appreciate all the hard work you've put into this game. Just letting you know there's no rush take your time
A few immersion and continuity pictures that need addressing. They just seem off in terms of context. This applies to Celestia/Aurora and Luna/Selene wings. Why are Queen's wings so small compared to her sister? Just the standing pose it seems. Just oveerlooked stuff before the final product I guess. No rush. Art should never be rushed.
