indio68

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what a way to end a good game , dev...killing the MC and all Her lovers...can't belive this shit...and what are the differences in corruptyion and other ending , if there are more than this shitty one? at least i'm glad that >Maive cheated on that bastard Husbnad
 

indio68

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Like I said many times in the thread, the game is lacking financial support, that's why the ending is rushed. I mean, what can you expect when everyone is complaining like they own the game but they are so poor and can't support the game financially. I'm working here, not doing some kind of charity.

Maive will be one of the main lovers in the sequel, stop spreading fake information
Dear dev, Maive in the ending had her life and soul sucked into the crystal and than , that crystal ,exploded...so she is definitely dead...than if in next game you will play with time travel or time anomaly to doesn't let the char that made your game decent and followed go, is another story entirely....your are, sadly ,not the first nor the last , that screwed his VN with a bad ending...just admit it and we all understand
 

Celestial Novel

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Jackie137-Me- Celestial Novel don't worry about those people they are haters or complainers you are awesome creator I love the graphics to the game and how well the animations run in game but had no idea of all the bad negative comments until now I'm sorry you have to go through this ignore there messages or take them off you don't deserve to be spoken like that you completed a masterpiece and it's getting a sequel you are awesome Celestial Novel. ="Celestial Novel, post: 16420248, member: 4977460"]
Thanks for your kind words man :)
 
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Nikephouros

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I have a few thoughts regarding how this game ended, off the bat, I'm not saying this game is horrible in any way. I liked the game (except for the ending).

To start about the game in general. Fate is paced very, very well. It drip feeds you information and you as the player get to unravel the story along with Maive. I liked that, personally, I think this game suffers from not knowing what it wants to be, and what I mean by that is the love and corruption system. Aside from locked choices, there wasn't a narrative reason for any of the choices. As someone who loves lesbian incest involved games, I thought it was dope how it took a realistic approach to these more taboo topics. So through the first 12 chapters we get to know Maive as a person we have molded her into. I think the reason why the ending doesn't work for most of us who played is 1. the choice system ultimately didn't matter, and that takes agency from your audience. 2. If you played the corruption path like I did, the husband's ramblings about how much he loves MC doesn't hit the same way as, let's say a love route (which I assume it might be the same). When I got the 3rd door, I was confused and disappointed about the payoff of your choices, especially when it's not explained what the doors mean in the scope of the narrative. I am one for a solid bitter sweet ending, but the ending felt as though CN wanted a clean break to start all over again. I think this game would've been better as a kinetic novel as that is a solid way to tell a story. Since *and this is a personal preference of mine* the next game will feature a male protag I'm not going to play it. Lastly, in terms of paying money, (and this might come off as harsh) but I will play again on here and I like it, I will either sub to the site or buy it on steam, because a good game, is a good game. Looking at the story as a whole, I would've wanted an entire refund. That's because the ending as a whole feels like everything is stripped from you, and it doesn't explain why it's doing it, meaning, in a choice game, why do we have no agency to the outcome? Hell, even a choice if we were to side with Hanz or walk away from him would have been better.
 
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