Ren'Py Completed F.I.L.F. [v1.0b] [ICCreations]

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Just got round to finishing this but wished I hadn't when I got to Mayors Election Party What the Fuck.
The Mayor's Husband actively tried to Rape the MC's mom and if it wasn't for the two girls he would of.

As the MC was fucking cluelessly he's trying to ram a closed car door, a Door that opens outwards against the Cars body.
Thinking that would somehow open it.

But lets Ignore the stupidity of the MC for a moment THE MAYOR's Husband tried to RAPE the MC's mom.
They manage to knock him out tie him up but don't call the police?
Except for possibly lazy writing ideas in a game who would do that? It was Attempted Rape for fucks sake.
Not a slap on the ass and a quick grope.

Totaly ruined my mood for the Foursome later.
Just Sayin.
 
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LWtbo said:
Just got round to finishing this but wished I hadn't when I got to Mayors Election Party What the Fuck.
The Mayor's Husband actively tried to Rape the MC's mom and if it wasn't for the two girls he would of.

As the MC was fucking cluelessly he's trying to ram a closed car door, a Door that opens outwards against the Cars body.
Thinking that would somehow open it.

But lets Ignore the stupidity of the MC for a moment THE MAYOR's Husband tried to RAPE the MC's mom.
They manage to knock him out tie him up but don't call the police?
Except for possibly lazy writing ideas in a game who would do that? It was Attempted Rape for fucks sake.
Not a slap on the ass and a quick grope.

Totaly ruined my mood for the Foursome later.
Just Sayin.
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I think you're a bit confused. He's trying to break the window in a rage with his elbow. Which he eventually does with the use of the hammer. Unsure how you got the idea that he's literally trying to push a door inward. That doesn't make any sense.

As for your other critique, I find it rather boring to go with a simple call the cops and that's it. That would be lazy, uninteresting writing in my opinion. Not to mention it would also be less work for me to go your basic route. That is why I went with a different narrative so that I may put them in a tense situation that ultimately leads to the fivesome (Not foursome like you counted as I count five people). Overall, I simply wanted the MC to go a different route of payback, as I found it a lot more flavorful storywise.

I could spend 5 minutes editing the script for you with it fading to black after saving Melissa, an explanation that he got arrested, and not having anything that happened past that point (including the fivesome) as that no longer would make any sense storywise. I'm sure that'll be a lot more interesting.
 
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I think you're a bit confused. He's trying to break the window in a rage with his elbow. Which he eventually does with the use of the hammer. Unsure how you got the idea that he's literally trying to push a door inward. That doesn't make any sense.

As for your other critique, . That would be lazy, uninteresting writing in my opinion. Not to mention it would also be less work for me to go your basic route. That is why I went with a different narrative so that I may put them in a tense situation that ultimately leads to the fivesome (Not foursome like you counted as I count five people). Overall, I simply wanted the MC to go a different route of payback, as I found it a lot more flavorful storywise.

I could spend 5 minutes editing the script for you with it fading to black after saving Melissa, an explanation that he got arrested, and not having anything that happened past that point (including the fivesome) as that no longer would make any sense storywise. I'm sure that'll be a lot more interesting.
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Really then please Re-watch that Animation again!
And you will see that yes his elbow may hit the glass but actually its his whole arm and shoulder whats hitting the door glass.
The animation is not that a Elbow strike not that one could hope to break a car window anyway with an Eldow Strike .
Least not in anything other than the movies or a game.
But its a shoulder charge he appears to be useing in the animation not an eldow strike.
and it appears he is punching the door at the same time which is a movement you would make in a shoulder charge.
And not an Eldow Strike.
Add to that the "Fucking.... Thing.... Wont.... Budge!!!!!" comment and you have him shoulder charging a door shut.
If he was attempting to break the glass then "Fucking... Thing... wont... Break!!!!!!" makes much more sense.
And I just count the girls not the MC at the end and thats 4 but techniaclly your right a fivesome.

And sorry but "I find it rather boring to go with a simple call the cops and that's it" may be true for you!.
But its what you do in that situation.
And the bullshit cowardly crap they did when he got free that was interesting was it?.
Their attempt to deal with him failed and backfired once he got free.
But thats not the point you could of written a persistant drunken ass and tit grope by the Husband.
Which is fine for the bullshit that followed.
But didn't instead it was an attempted Rape scene and as someone that know someone that went through that very thing IRL
I'm sorry but call the Police is the only option even in a game short of killing the twat.
You wonna diminish the seriousness of that perticular crime for your game I can't stop you but i'm certainly not gona agree with it.


So my critique stands.
 
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Really then please Re-watch that Animation again!
And you will see that yes his elbow may hit the glass but actually its his whole arm and shoulder whats hitting the door glass.
The animation is not that a Elbow strike not that one could hope to break a car window anyway.
Least not in anything other than the movies or a game.
But its a shoulder charge he appears to be useing in the animation not an eldow strike.
and it appears he is punching the door at the same time which is the type of movement you would make in a shoulder charge.
And not an Eldow Strike.
Add to that the "Fucking.... Thing.... Wont.... Budge!!!!!" comment and you have him shoulder charging a door shut.
If he was attempting to break the glass thne "Fucking... Thing... wont... Break!!!!!!" makes much more sense.

And sorry but "I find it rather boring to go with a simple call the cops and that's it" may be true for you!.
But its what you do in that situation.
And the bullshit cowardly crap they did when he got free that was interesting was it?.
Their attempt to deal with him failed and backfired once he got free.
But thats not the point you could of written a drunken ass and tit grope by the Husband which is fine for the bullshit that followed.
But it was attempted Rape and as someone that know someone that went through that very thing IRL
I'm sorry but call the Police is the only option even in a game short of killing the twat.
You wonna diminish the seriousness of that perticular crime for your game I can't stop you but i'm certainly not gona agree with it.
And I just count the girls not the MC at the end and thats 4

So my critique stands.
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Checked the animation. I completely disagree. Even if were so, it wouldn't matter as it's the attempt to put force onto the windshield and break it.

The animation is not that a Elbow strike not that one could hope to break a car window anyway.
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That's true. It wouldn't break it. At least not likely. The point is that at the very moment, there was of little time and the first thing that comes to mind is to attempt it. If I was personally in the same situation, I would very likely attempt the same.

"Fucking.... Thing.... Wont.... Budge!!!!!"
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I can agree with you there. Budge in the reference to moving and not breaking wouldn't be the best of words. Definitely could have gone with something better.

And sorry but "I find it rather boring to go with a simple call the cops and that's it" may be true for you!.
But its what you do in that situation.
Least not in anything other than the movies or a game.
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Don't forget that this is a game. You said it here yourself. This isn't real life. If you prefer that any altercation in every AVN to have the cops being called, I call that the vanilla of everything that can be vanilla. My personal preference along with a lot of players on here have agreed so I'm happy.

Anyways, I'll leave it at that and go back to putting my game thread on ignore as it's healthy that I shouldn't care to please people who aggressively nitpick as no matter what I do, they will find something else to be angry about. Sorry that something like that happened to someone you know in real life, but I won't change my story due to trauma of an individual.
 
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Won't matter because from what that last post from this Dev said it would seem the Dev wont see this.
But if he really thinks thats how to Elbow strike a side window is animated then he needs glasses.
(And its not a Windshield geez he can't even tell what window his own MC is trying to break).

Then its no wonder he thinks anyone else in that situation will think as this MC did (or in this case didn't).
And so wouldn't be looking around for something to break the window with in the first place.
Instead of haveing to have two women figger it out for him because well he did write this crap.

Its allso not suprising he's makeing out I asked him to re-write that bullshit at the End of that Election party scene.
Which btw I didn't and never would.
I mentioned one way it could of gone instead of the way he decided to write it but I never ask/told him to re-write it.

I just told him In my opinion atleast that part of the ending of that Election party was total unbelievable crap.
And I stand by it.
I would Review this game but upto that point it wasn't such a bad game.
P.S. OMG I just re-watched it and its worse than I thought the MC's headbutting it the same time.
 
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After F.I.L.F. 2, could a direct sequel to this happen? A "F.I.L.F. Gaiden", if you will? MC has to find ways to support his family and will have the chance to expand.
 
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Gaunt27 said:
After F.I.L.F. 2, could a direct sequel to this happen? A "F.I.L.F. Gaiden", if you will? MC has to find ways to support his family and will have the chance to expand.
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First let him finish F.I.L.F. 2 first before you ask about a 3rd sequel.
 
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I can't complete that task where we have to bring Melissa (mom) her favourite bottle, the slider or the thing was too fast. Any suggestions how I can get past that minigame?
 
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So, I started this game today and for the life of me I cannot figure out how to go to the clothing Boutique in the beginning. I mean, Melissa said to meet her at Clothing Boutique but I cannot leave the house, or rather I don't know how to leave the house. Also, I cannot use the Map since it is disabled. Can anyone help me with it?
 
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How_to_do said:
So, I started this game today and for the life of me I cannot figure out how to go to the clothing Boutique in the beginning. I mean, Melissa said to meet her at Clothing Boutique but I cannot leave the house, or rather I don't know how to leave the house. Also, I cannot use the Map since it is disabled. Can anyone help me with it?
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f your in your house Exits in the Living room. screenshot0001.jpg Map is only active outside.
 
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