I think you're a bit confused. He's trying to break the window in a rage with his elbow. Which he eventually does with the use of the hammer. Unsure how you got the idea that he's literally trying to push a door inward. That doesn't make any sense.
As for your other critique, . That would be lazy, uninteresting writing in my opinion. Not to mention it would also be less work for me to go your basic route. That is why I went with a different narrative so that I may put them in a tense situation that ultimately leads to the fivesome (Not foursome like you counted as I count five people). Overall, I simply wanted the MC to go a different route of payback, as I found it a lot more flavorful storywise.
I could spend 5 minutes editing the script for you with it fading to black after saving Melissa, an explanation that he got arrested, and not having anything that happened past that point (including the fivesome) as that no longer would make any sense storywise. I'm sure that'll be a lot more interesting.
Really then please Re-watch that Animation again!
And you will see that yes his elbow may hit the glass but actually its his whole arm and shoulder whats hitting the door glass.
The animation is not that a Elbow strike not that one could hope to break a car window anyway with an Eldow Strike .
Least not in anything other than the movies or a game.
But its a shoulder charge he appears to be useing in the animation not an eldow strike.
and it appears he is punching the door at the same time which is a movement you would make in a shoulder charge.
And not an Eldow Strike.
Add to that the "Fucking.... Thing.... Wont.... Budge!!!!!" comment and you have him shoulder charging a door shut.
If he was attempting to break the glass then "Fucking... Thing... wont... Break!!!!!!" makes much more sense.
And I just count the girls not the MC at the end and thats 4 but techniaclly your right a fivesome.
And sorry but "I find it rather boring to go with a simple call the cops and that's it" may be true for you!.
But its what you do in that situation.
And the bullshit cowardly crap they did when he got free that was interesting was it?.
Their attempt to deal with him failed and backfired once he got free.
But thats not the point you could of written a persistant drunken ass and tit grope by the Husband.
Which is fine for the bullshit that followed.
But didn't instead it was an attempted Rape scene and as someone that know someone that went through that very thing IRL
I'm sorry but call the Police is the only option even in a game short of killing the twat.
You wonna diminish the seriousness of that perticular crime for your game I can't stop you but i'm certainly not gona agree with it.
So my critique stands.
