Hi Engulfed,
Thank you for your comment. Although i'm glad you think that i have talent, i have to say that i know that is not correct

The reason why i can fully know this is that i do have talent in something else, and in that specific field that i'm talented in, i know :
- which part of it is wrong
- why it is wrong
- how to fix it
While in the field of writing, i failed at the (1), and even when people told me (1) and (2), i don't concretely know how to do (3) because the first two was only told to me, and not that i actually understood it

True, part of it comes with experience. But experience is not something I can acquire fast enough for this story.
That field that i'm talented in translate to..maybe 1/4 of the process of writing, but prose, wording, flow, rhythm, all those basics of writings are just too out of reach for me 0_0a
I will take your advice to mind, but, to tell you the truth, even I don't have high hopes that i can do that to an acceptable degree

All i can do is try my best
But thanks for trying and taking the time and effort to give me those advices
on a side note, for my patreons, here are my subscribestar renders for those who can't access subscribestar
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Thank you all