Ren'Py What would you like to see in my game?

[Stalker Seducer]

I'm making a femdom focused visual novel, with a emphasis on choices. the main plot is that you are sold as a slave to the youngest of 3 daughters in a rich noble family.
i already have a certain amount of scenes/routes/endings i want to write, i have about 6 endings planned so far. however i'm struggling to write alternative routes and i want more variation, possible outcomes, etc, in my game.

So my question to you, patrons of f95. what would you like to see in this game? are you even interested in trying it out, if not what would make you interested? i have a poll including some of the things i have been thinking about, or you can write your own.

 

[Stalker Seducer]

Succubus Hunter Bowsette s slave Insomnimaniac Games thoughts?

 

[Insomnimaniac Games]

Game wouldn't be my cup of tea, but I think an interesting, unique plot hook would to be have your MC "team up" with the youngest daughter to take over the family, having her go from harsh mistress to dominant lover of the MC over time.

 

[NextRaikage]

Femdom is always a bit a hit or miss for me. I do like dominant female characters more then the shy ones, and i do like a certain level of femdom, but it's more in the 'soft femdom area' then the 'hardcore' one. So for me it would be a matter of how far you would go with Femdom and how choices might impact that. Plus also, is it a male or female MC (i guess Male?) because i'm really not to heavy into lesbian plus on top of that femdom stuff.

Well about 'wishes' in particular, except that i hope that choices can potentially lead to a more softer outcome, the only 'minor' requirement which i've for games is a nameable MC. If that's in you have already set up a groundwork for me to try... (if there isn't a tag which really disgust me... but i won't drop any examples because i don't want to kinkshame).

 

[Stalker Seducer]

Game wouldn't be my cup of tea, but I think an interesting, unique plot hook would to be have your MC "team up" with the youngest daughter to take over the family, having her go from harsh mistress to dominant lover of the MC over time.

Didn't say something about futas, that is pretty out of character for you... what did you do with the real insomnimaniac games?

And yeah, i was planning on having a dark romance route. where you corrupt her and encourage her blood thirsty tendencies, ending the game by being a pair of assassin lovers, probably called "bonnie and clyde ending" but i was considering having that route split into a "dark queen" ending based on your choices, which would basically be the exact thing you suggested. taking over the family and making her the queen of a criminal expire.

 

[Insomnimaniac Games]

Didn't say something about futas, that is pretty out of character for you... what did you do with the real insomnimaniac games?

I did vote for the futa option! Though, I personally only like Futa on Female stuff, I felt that I must or my futa fan card may have been taken from me.

And yeah, i was planning on having a dark romance route. where you corrupt her and encourage her blood thirsty tendencies, ending the game by being a pair of assassin lovers, probably called "bonnie and clyde ending" but i was considering having that route split into a "dark queen" ending based on your choices, which would basically be the exact thing you suggested. taking over the family and making her the queen of a criminal expire.

The dark queen ending seems interesting. It basically flips everything on it's head from the stereotypical slave game. Those are usually zero to hero, femdom to maledom, but here you have MC making someone else the "hero", while still presumably maintaining the femdom aspects.

 

[Stalker Seducer]

Femdom is always a bit a hit or miss for me. I do like dominant female characters more then the shy ones, and i do like a certain level of femdom, but it's more in the 'soft femdom area' then the 'hardcore' one. So for me it would be a matter of how far you would go with Femdom and how choices might impact that. Plus also, is it a male or female MC (i guess Male?) because i'm really not to heavy into lesbian plus on top of that femdom stuff.

Well about 'wishes' in particular, except that i hope that choices can potentially lead to a more softer outcome, the only 'minor' requirement which i've for games is a nameable MC. If that's in you have already set up a groundwork for me to try... (if there isn't a tag which really disgust me... but i won't drop any examples because i don't want to kinkshame).

It is going to be male MC only. i do plan on the level of femdom changing with your choices to some degree.

As for fetishes i plan on having the off putting ones be avoidable, for example instead of drinking piss you can offer to give her cunnilingus.

 

[bludysunday]

Without knowing any of the characters backgrounds, motives, or story: you could have middle sister obsessed with the protagonist while the oldest sister obsessed with the younger sister an have an ending where they team up and split the couple up. You could also have one of those be a futa and make Insomniac happy,

 

[Stalker Seducer]

I did vote for the futa option! Though, I personally only like Futa on Female stuff, I felt that I must or my futa fan card may have been taken from me.

The dark queen ending seems interesting. It basically flips everything on it's head from the stereotypical slave game. Those are usually zero to hero, femdom to maledom, but here you have MC making someone else the "hero", while still presumably maintaining the femdom aspects.

That was a close one, futa card almost trashed.

The game will start with basically unavoidable femdom, unfortunately just the way i writ the story/intro. but your choices will expand as the game goes on from wholesome romance, to submissive pet, to maledom harem king.

I would say the core dialogue is written with the romance ending in mind, but i try to keep it neutral enough that the other endings don't feel out of place.

 

[Stalker Seducer]

Without knowing any of the characters backgrounds, motives, or story: you could have middle sister obsessed with the protagonist while the oldest sister obsessed with the younger sister an have an ending where they team up and split the couple up. You could also have one of those be a futa and make Insomniac happy,

I am thinking of making the middle sister a futa, (with very optional content for those who don't like futa) while the older sister is trying to steal you away from the younger sister.

The story is heavily focused around the youngest sister, but i have 5 female characters in the story that you will probably be able to have sex with.

 

[Insomnimaniac Games]

The game will start with basically unavoidable femdom, unfortunately just the way i writ the story/intro. but your choices will expand as the game goes on from wholesome romance, to submissive pet, to maledom harem king.

I don't think that's unfortunate at all. With the MC starting as a slave, it makes the most sense to the overall story. It's the starting point, with the player's choices determining how the character deals with it, and feels about it. (Or, at least, that's what it seems to me based of your description.)

 

[Stalker Seducer]

I don't think that's unfortunate at all. With the MC starting as a slave, it makes the most sense to the overall story. It's the starting point, with the player's choices determining how the character deals with it, and feels about it. (Or, at least, that's what it seems to me based of your description.)

I guess i'm just concerned some players are going to be off put by being railroaded into obeying the youngest sister for the first part of the game. especially if you are only playing it for the maledom harem ending.

 

[Insomnimaniac Games]

I guess i'm just concerned some players are going to be off put by being railroaded into obeying the youngest sister for the first part of the game. especially if you are only playing it for the maledom harem ending.

You're not going to be able to please everybody anyway. If that's the game you want to make, and the story you want to tell, that's what you should do. Haters are a dime a dozen and not worth paying attention to, despite how much they think they know about "the correct way" to make these games. But the people who say "I can't wait for the next update!", I can't even begin to describe how surreal and awesome it is to have people say that about something you've created. Those are the people that truly matter.

Having said that, if you're really worried about it, making the MCs inner thoughts influenced by player choices would be a decent way to alleviate the issue. You could easily play it as the MC going along with it, biding his time, slowly building what he needs to take over.

 

[Stalker Seducer]

You're not going to be able to please everybody anyway. If that's the game you want to make, and the story you want to tell, that's what you should do. Haters are a dime a dozen and not worth paying attention to, despite how much they think they know about "the correct way" to make these games. But the people who say "I can't wait for the next update!", I can't even begin to describe how surreal and awesome it is to have people say that about something you've created. Those are the people that truly matter.

Having said that, if you're really worried about it, making the MCs inner thoughts influenced by player choices would be a decent way to alleviate the issue. You could easily play it as the MC going along with it, biding his time, slowly building what he needs to take over.

I already have a bare minimum submission route where you can refuse her first two orders (and be punished) and then on the 3rd one she gives you an ultimatum. you can reluctantly obey or go to a "bad" ending.

I think it is written in a fairly realistic way for a slave with no human rights if not lenient on the player, but porn game players aren't always a fan of realisim or femdom

 

[Succubus Hunter]

You know me, lots of reverse ravishment, hitting/ abuse, and mixed boxing.

In terms of your VN setting, I'd suggest having a romantic futa ravishment route. MC could get drunk and pass out in the hay only to wake up with a nice breakfast and shy and nervous futa girl beside him. She would tell him how he looked so cute and huggable while he was passed out and how she was jealous of how the three sisters got to play with you. She continues to say that she's not sadistic like the others and actually likes you likes you. She pleads for you not to be mad and even offers her bussy to make up for her taking you earlier.

 

[Stalker Seducer]

You know me, lots of reverse ravishment, hitting/ abuse, and mixed boxing.

In terms of your VN setting, I'd suggest having a romantic futa ravishment route. MC could get drunk and pass out in the hay only to wake up with a nice breakfast and shy and nervous futa girl beside him. She would tell him how he looked so cute and huggable while he was passed out and how she was jealous of how the three sisters got to play with you. She continues to say that she's not sadistic like the others and actually likes you likes you. She pleads for you not to be mad and even offers her bussy to make up for her taking you earlier.

There will be whipping, hitting, and kicking... not sure mixed boxing really fits the setting.

I think i am going to make the futa kind of an antisocial nerdy weird girl, i don't know about strictly "shy" but kinda like that i guess.

 

[ulysses06]

I like the overall premise of the plot you mentioned, probably a bit similar to a few games out there but can be perfectly original with execution.

In regards to possible endings, I always liked the dark endings of MironY, so something of that caliber as an option would be great, perhaps with the masochist or submissive ending.

As for fetishes, I'm a sucker for headscissors so if you include that in the game even for only one scene, I'd definetly give it a try.

 

[Cartman-Brah]

I respect that you want to make your game as detailed as possible, but I think 6 endings are enough. more can be challenging for people who want to see every ending.

other than that, if you are making a femdom themed game, you can use everything in the options.

 

[Mister_M]

I'm making a femdom focused visual novel, with a emphasis on choices. the main plot is that you are sold as a slave to the youngest of 3 daughters in a rich noble family.
i already have a certain amount of scenes/routes/endings i want to write, i have about 6 endings planned so far. however i'm struggling to write alternative routes and i want more variation, possible outcomes, etc, in my game.

So my question to you, patrons of f95. what would you like to see in this game? are you even interested in trying it out, if not what would make you interested? i have a poll including some of the things i have been thinking about, or you can write your own.

I'm def interested in seeing the game. Even playing it! I'm not sure about the things from the poll, but I like to be surprised. I'm really happy to see you're planing a lot of choice,s smth I really like in games. I wish you good luck and I hope you'll make a great (and profitable ) game!

Edit: the only thing I may add regarding my preferences is I'd like to see some black dommes

 

[Stalker Seducer]

I'm def interested in seeing the game. Even playing it! I'm not sure about the things from the poll, but I like to be surprised. I'm really happy to see you're planing a lot of choice,s smth I really like in games. I wish you good luck and I hope you'll make a great (and profitable ) game!

Edit: the only thing I may add regarding my preferences is I'd like to see some black dommes

It's going to be a free game.