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[King_Gonta]

No slight intended - what do you find interesting about a Jessie plotline? He's a lovesick puppy with no real value accept as a nuisance and wasted word count (Edit: that's not fair. He was valuable for the story as a narrative device but now that he's served his purpose he's taking up space that could be dedicated to better scenes). I doubt with everything Sarah knows now, that she would ever willingly fuck him again. I say willingly bc who the fuck knows at this point what Lester will do with his pawn moving forward.

He can be used at right time to distract dan and Lester can "protect " Sarah and her family from him cementing his status as a legit mate in Sarah's brain

 

[King_Gonta]

I'm still waiting to see if Sarah will really use Dan's fear against him, destroying him completely for Lester's pleasure. The "pineapple" can be used hen Sarah starts wanting to use Dan's fear against him, starting the humiliation, calling him pathetic, revealing Dan's fears to Lester, him saying pineapple asking her to stop and shut up and she continues.

Thats something I look forward too

Sarah is not just his wife but his best friend or only friend .A pillar as well as guide .till now

Having that taken away in his downfall will be absolutely crushing .

A husband wife relationship is not all about sex but many little things .

 

[Kabirdaundiyal]

Hey guys does anyone have final ch27 yet?

 

[Ndbaelor]

Hey guys does anyone have final ch27 yet?

It's been released in his kemono page. Check couple of pages ago for the kemono link.

 

[abhikd94]

Can someone share newlyweds new desire ch -14 by mad stories and best of friends ch 9-12 by mrjakobs?

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

I agree with most of what you are saying. I know we haven't seen eye to eye on things in the past, but I'm with you on the kids should be a background element only. However I do see why DS adds them into the narrative. This is a great example of it.

Her daughter, who called out to her earlier, must have gotten into her bed after using the bathroom. Sarah smiled and immediately felt guilty at her exchange with Lester. Sarah settled into her side of the bed, not wanting to disturb her child. And as much as she wanted to cuddle with her, she didn’t, not after what she had just done. She closed her eyes and let sleep take her.

Some of DS's patrons suggested this showed Sarah as being a selfish bitch only caring about herself. However I see it as a way of showing Sarah's remorse for her behavior and also a reminder to Sarah of how much she has fallen. Could DS have written it so that this didn't involve the kids, maybe, but would it have the same emotional impact on the reader if it was something she said to Dan. And since he hasn't given Sarah any friends to reach out to - he has done exactly what you are suggesting - written himself into a corner.

I don't know why or how I missed that, but I did. What gets me more is that she not only wouldn't embrace her daughter but her staying separate was not just because of the phone sex, that just happened, but because she most likely knew she would be thinking/dreaming of fucking Lester and it being filmed and she prioritized that over her love/responsibility for daughter, instead wanting not her but Lester and his cock.

 

[Digging_story]

I don't know why or how I missed that, but I did. What gets me more is that she not only wouldn't embrace her daughter but her staying separate was not just because of the phone sex, that just happened, but because she most likely knew she would be thinking/dreaming of fucking Lester and it being filmed and she prioritized that over her love/responsibility for daughter, instead wanting not her but Lester and his cock.

Funny, I hadn't thought of it from that point of view - I was thinking it was more that she felt guilty; knew it was wrong and Dan might have been right about her losing control.....I think things have to start heating up or Lester just takes over.

 

[Verisimilinude]

I don't know why or how I missed that, but I did. What gets me more is that she not only wouldn't embrace her daughter but her staying separate was not just because of the phone sex, that just happened, but because she most likely knew she would be thinking/dreaming of fucking Lester and it being filmed and she prioritized that over her love/responsibility for daughter, instead wanting not her but Lester and his cock.

I certainly can see how it could be interpreted that way. I guess I just read it differently. It struck me as guilt and remorse. She wanted to cuddle with her daughter but she didn't feel she deserved it bc of her earlier behavior.

 

[Psiber@mauvais]

I certainly can see how it could be interpreted that way. I guess I just read it differently. It struck me as guilt and remorse. She wanted to cuddle with her daughter but she didn't feel she deserved it bc of her earlier behavior.

At first, I totally agreed with you and believe that is her conscious reasoning, however, when she went to sleep her sub-conscious took over and, in my opinion, took over and soothed her guilt feelings by taking her away from her daughter, in her dreams, anyway as guilt does work itself in our minds through dreams. However, her sub-C sent her back to Lester and shrugged off the guilt. I would love to see what her reaction and attitude is in the morning around her daughter.

 

[DarkStutzel]

Their marriage is over, the mother does the chores of taking the kids to and from school because she has to. Dan is also a shitty father, he doesn't care about his kids, if he did he would know that Sarah was with a man at home (his daughter would ask why he didn't talk to her when he went home and didn't even say goodbye). Dan would be on alert. I wanted to see how Sarah would react to Dan getting with another woman, he hasn't had sex with his wife for a long time, and they seem to be like animals. Sarah doesn't have any friends at the hospital (nurses, porters, I know that part of the administrative team left, but she doesn't know anyone). The same Dan works there, there's no secretary or receptionist at the company. Some strange things about the story, let's see if Sarah and Lester meet anyone in town. I hope she keeps her new ring from Lester, he could steal the wedding ring that Dan gave her and then only use Lester's wedding ring. (lester is dirty and can affect Dan a lot, like that).

 

[idkmanerally]

this isn't directed at anyone in particular, so no one take offense: do you see how every character typed about the kids in this thread is just a bummer? there is absolutely nothing sexy about arguing about who is or isn't a good father or good mother. it's just an anvil around the neck of the story. it adds weird stakes to a story that should be about fucking and sucking and turns every blowjob into, "okay, but was that BJ fair to the well-being of their toddler?" its such a narrative blunder by don, he should release a no-kids cut of the story or something.

 

[adamblack144]

Yeah I really don't like it. It takes me out of the story anytime they're mentioned

Plus the pregnancy angle would be hotter if she didnt have kids. Impregnating a young woman who's husband has failed or who's been previously against it is juicier than doing it to a mother of two

 

[King_Gonta]

Their marriage is over, the mother does the chores of taking the kids to and from school because she has to. Dan is also a shitty father, he doesn't care about his kids, if he did he would know that Sarah was with a man at home (his daughter would ask why he didn't talk to her when he went home and didn't even say goodbye). Dan would be on alert. I wanted to see how Sarah would react to Dan getting with another woman, he hasn't had sex with his wife for a long time, and they seem to be like animals. Sarah doesn't have any friends at the hospital (nurses, porters, I know that part of the administrative team left, but she doesn't know anyone

Applying any sort of logic to NTR (except the ones which help ) defeats it's purpose .

The story is simply about two people now. Sarah and Lester .both these characters are interesting in their own and together .

At first it was about dan too but as Lester came in foreground .dan has diminished as a character. He has already been cuckolded and emasculated . his character arc is boring to read unlike Corey from "Ascending Lauren ".

My unpopular opinion is relegating Dan in background while Lester and Sarah revel in their relationship for a few chapters .

Also Dan and Sarah's marriage should remain intact cuz breaking it will also defeat the story's purpose . It was never about their marriage

Lester can always be her one "true" love while Dan will be the father and husband who ocassionaly visits his family . Dan's ultimate punishment will be loosing the passion he hoped cuckolding will bring in their marriage