VN HTML To the Top [Ch. 2] [Veruthe]

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This is the story of the personal and professional lives of the employees of the venture capital firm 'Future Capital'. When Future Capital came into the scene first, nobody even took them seriously. But in just a decade, they have managed to ascend to the top of New Yark City's cutthroat corporate world as well as expand to neighboring cities. You will see the good, the bad, and the ugly side of a bunch of people if you choose to go along for this ride.​

Thread Updated: 2024-08-08
Release Date: 2024-08-08
Developer: Veruthe -

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Version: Chapter 2
OS: Windows, Mac, Linux
Language: English
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[Supreme_Evil]

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[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[loqex]

Thanks for sharing!

So glad it's not a QSP type game.

 

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[tehmasta]

So you choose and play 1 protag or are you forced to play both?

 

[Veruthe]

So you choose and play 1 protag or are you forced to play both?

This is basically a story. Your protagonist will be the one you like/relate to the most. Sorry I forgot to add the VN tag.

 

[RuthBlackett]

"New York and neighboring cities" huh?

How did they move Tower Bridge across the Atlantic?

 

[Veruthe]

"New York and neighboring cities" huh?

How did they move Tower Bridge across the Atlantic?

It clearly says New Yark. I think there's been a misunderstanding on your part.

 

[I-Love-Adventure]

nice game thank you

 

[RuthBlackett]

It clearly says New Yark. I think there's been a misunderstanding on your part.

That's London in the banner...

 

[Veruthe]

That's London in the banner...

I know. I just liked pic and decided to use it for the banner.

 

[Trasher2018]

My first complain - dont do "no choice" choices. When you refuse, it just ends - or it just continues anyway. That is not a real choice. (e.g. the bar, where it doesnt matter what you pick)

Then there are so many characters and perspective shifts - it is just confusing. The "MC" has probably the smallest part in this. Most of the time you see other ppl do stuff.

So its a linear VN without any real choice - you can just end it early and no real protagonist. Its more like a porn movie to click thru.

Oh and then the font - serif fonts are not that great to read on screens - you can use that for buttons/headline and stuff, but you should not use it for continuous text.

The clips and images are fine, and overall the writing is ok, but tbh - as I said - you can just watch a porn movie and get the same linear experience.

 

[Veruthe]

My first complain - dont do "no choice" choices. When you refuse, it just ends - or it just continues anyway. That is not a real choice. (e.g. the bar, where it doesnt matter what you pick)

Then there are so many characters and perspective shifts - it is just confusing. The "MC" has probably the smallest part in this. Most of the time you see other ppl do stuff.

So its a linear VN without any real choice - you can just end it early and no real protagonist. Its more like a porn movie to click thru.

Oh and then the font - serif fonts are not that great to read on screens - you can use that for buttons/headline and stuff, but you should not use it for continuous text.

The clips and images are fine, and overall the writing is ok, but tbh - as I said - you can just watch a porn movie and get the same linear experience.

Thanks for your feedback. Moving forward, I will take the issues you mentioned into consideration and try to improve on the aspects you mentioned.

 

[rKnight]

When Future Capital came into the scene first, nobody even took them seriously. But in just a decade, they have managed to ascend to the top of New Yark City's cutthroat corporate world.

You saved some money, now you are rich.


THX for sharing...

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Innocent Chloe]

My first complain - dont do "no choice" choices. When you refuse, it just ends - or it just continues anyway. That is not a real choice. (e.g. the bar, where it doesnt matter what you pick)

Then there are so many characters and perspective shifts - it is just confusing. The "MC" has probably the smallest part in this. Most of the time you see other ppl do stuff.

So its a linear VN without any real choice - you can just end it early and no real protagonist. Its more like a porn movie to click thru.

Oh and then the font - serif fonts are not that great to read on screens - you can use that for buttons/headline and stuff, but you should not use it for continuous text.

The clips and images are fine, and overall the writing is ok, but tbh - as I said - you can just watch a porn movie and get the same linear experience.

This is why I always get worried when I see both male and female protagonist tags and multiple protagonist tags in general

Anyway that aside, there is a mistake in the preview images...



"She came with his shaft inside him"

I am guessing that is meant to be "She came with his shaft inside her"
Also not to nitpick but since I am already at it. The next sentence too should be;
"It's been a while, huh?"


With its vs it's

Just always think if you are saying "it has" then it will be "it's" while its is used for property like "That goblin took the ring, it is now its property"

Whereas it has, it is, it has been, etc... will all become it's

 

[Veruthe]

This is why I always get worried when I see both male and female protagonist tags and multiple protagonist tags in general

Anyway that aside, there is a mistake in the preview images...

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"She came with his shaft inside him"

I am guessing that is meant to be "She came with his shaft inside her"
Also not to nitpick but since I am already at it. The next sentence too should be;
"It's been a while, huh?"


With its vs it's

Just always think if you are saying "it has" then it will be "it's" while its is used for property like "That goblin took the ring, it is now its property"

Whereas it has, it is, it has been, etc... will all become it's

Thanks for pointing out my mistake. I will check for similar mistakes and make a patch as soon as possible.

 

[Yog-Sloth]

so more of a novel then a game?

 

[Veruthe]

so more of a novel then a game?

For now, yes. But I plan to implement some level of choice based content in the future updates.