HTML Orphan [Ch.3] [Exalted Text]

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Orphan is an adult Dark Fantasy CYOA set in a dying neo-Rome ruined by Sorcery, ruled by the Blade. Immerse yourself in an unforgiving world, full of violence, magic, sex and intrigue. Life in the Cradle is short, brutish and crude. Ruined nobles struggle for power amongst the shadows of a crumbling city-state teeming with sorcery, rampant slavery and corruption. And you... you're just a nobody. For now.

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Thread Updated: 2024-12-14
Release Date: 2024-12-14
Developer: Exalted Text -

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Censored: No
Version: Chapter 3
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
Length: 141,000 words
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[sceller444]

Interesting, and stylish art looks nice.

 

[mochimomo]

looking good keep it up

 

[kidderyao]

warham.. nothing lol

 

[telotelo]

can only found two scenes so far, one of them is a dream

some suggestion

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anyway, best of luck on chapter 3 serum

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[JValkonian]

Where are the tits and ass??????

I do like that first pic, that classic look

 

[xmilteach]

thx

 

[Exalted Text]

try

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,
some of the color composition is really hard on the eyes -
especially on low brightness

Most of the feedback seemed to be concerned with the link color specifically, so I changed them to gold/yellow and added a text shadow after a helpful suggestion (and code snippet) from someone who played through the chapter. Also had a couple complaints about the text scaling on different monitors/browsers, so I added 3 different text sizes and font types that you can switch between in the settings now. Much better.

the npcs' name,
hard to spell even harder to remember -
unfamiliar foreign name that i can't recall again later, right?
mercedes the wizard

... so I shouldn't name the next npc Sobaru-Neisongo?

Anyway, the feedback is appreciated. There will likely be a few more minor changes and revisions to Chapter 1, but for the most part I'm focused on finishing the outline for Chapter 2 and will begin writing tomorrow. I'm fuckin' stoked. A lot of things are liable to change so I definitely welcome any and all of you to join the Discord and chat about the game/story.

warham.. nothing lol

Any comparison to Warhammer is a massive compliment to me. 40k and WH Fantasy are definitely two of my biggest inspirations, I will never deny that.

 

[Gakko_dev]

This is awesome! Thank you for sharing!

 

[00M0R1]

Is pregnancy a possible future tag?

 

[RhapsodicHotShot]

yoooo I love the artstyle and the setting sounds super interesting, definitely will check it out once have the time, although im a saddened it doesnt have some kind of limited character creator, would love to play as a futa/dickgirl

 

[Exalted Text]

This is awesome! Thank you for sharing!

Thanks! You're awesome - I appreciate the comment.

Is pregnancy a possible future tag?

Possible? Most definitely. I have no plans for it currently, but pregnancy is one of my personal favorite kinks/tags so if it ever makes sense as the story progresses... it'll certainly be there.

yoooo I love the artstyle and the setting sounds super interesting, definitely will check it out once have the time, although im a saddened it doesnt have some kind of limited character creator, would love to play as a futa/dickgirl

Originally, I did want to include some character customization, from gender to race (human, dark elf, orc, etc.) but with what I have planned for the story and my style of writing, I don't think it would've worked out. But who knows exactly what the future holds in store?

 

[ChangoFeroz]

For me it ends right after the dream like the first time I played this. How do you get to the coliseum?

 

[00M0R1]

Possible? Most definitely. I have no plans for it currently, but pregnancy is one of my personal favorite kinks/tags so if it ever makes sense as the story progresses... it'll certainly be there.

Fair enough. Will keep an eye on your project.

 

[Exalted Text]

For me it ends right after the dream like the first time I played this. How do you get to the coliseum?

The quickest way currently is... Turn Right and Leap.

Enjoy. I'm likely going to make getting to these paths more self-evident and streamlined in the next installment. Will be dropping teasers in my

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over the coming weeks.

 

[Malkavian]

Consider me deeply interested. The writing is great, the setting is interesting, !!goblin shortstack!!

What worries me is how many branches there seems to have, be careful with how much work you have lol

 

[Nimbus Commando]

So this inspired by Rome cause that is super rare

 

[cantwakeup111]

Great read so far. Anxiously waiting for more.

 

[Jack Nippleson]

Can't access the full setting tab even in full screen mode.